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Tyris
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| TheBritishInvasion wrote: | | if it's not a soulstone power why does she have the nose of a bloodhound? |
Eh, our mother can do the same thing and she hasn't got a soulstone...
In an immense twist of irony, that sensitive nose is coupled with asthmatic lungs, so she can't take a deep sniff of anything without going into a coughing fit... but we're getting off topic, now.
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Lady Calie
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I love nans eyes :3
Willows eye in the bottom part actually took me back for a sec.
btw the page doesn't look rusty at all 
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Ravenna
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14/4/2008
I have to reiterate what Caelie just said - the page does not seem rusty in the SLIGHTEST. I am loving Nan's eyes of sparkling anger and Felucca's sad face in particular.
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Violabelle
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Is Willow lying on straw?  Where's the sexy red sheets! C'mon redux Tristram, get with the program!
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Tamir
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I don't know what you're talking about, Lady...the page looks great. The only strange thing is the length of Willow's neck...maybe Tristram stretched it for her! ^^;;
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cvcdaisy3
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Straw? c'mon Tristam!
Fel looks depressed, and I can't begin to guess what you meant by 'rusty.' It looks fine to me!
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| I think that the long shot of Willow lying down looks amazing, not at all rusty! Like Tam said, the only thing a little bit off for me is Willow's neck at the very bottom. |
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Cherynic
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Overall I have to say the page looks fabulous. Though I have to agree about Willow's neck. When I first saw it I was a bit taken aback, it just seems a bit stretched. Other than that, Lady your artwork continues to blow me away with each new page.
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YatesOfYore
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Yeah... that's pretty much what I meant by rusty. Rusty = noticing proportion errors AFTER you're done the whole page. >.<;;
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PurpleCactusPlant
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Maybe a little on the proportions as you said Lady, but I think you got better at colouring! I love the lighting on Willow.
Don't worry though, updating 2x a week will undo that rustiness in no time. (But maybe you should update 3 or 4 times just to be sure?)
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Lady Calie
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I love the coloring as well and for some reason i didn't notice the whole neck thing (maybe why i never posted in this part of the forum much in the old forum? xD )
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Fenomena
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| I'm looking forward to the following scene. If Tristram's outer appearance got so much more awesome, his improved character will assimilate me and add me to the horde of fangirls. |
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Storm
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Hm... I wonder what Neuria's going to look like.
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Cherynic
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The anticipation of the next page... a rather tingly feeling. I am eagerly awaiting the awesomeness that is Tristram.
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YatesOfYore
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What will Neuria look like indeed! Mwaha 
This next page is killing me with the backgrounds, but it's turning out alright so yeah. ^_^;
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