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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

03.06.2013

Yes, Willow, walk right up to the evil enemy and expect him to sit down and discuss things logically.


Lady, you are AWESOME. That fanart is WIN. I would buy that and tape in the back of the book so that my children can see it when I read the story to them. My mother won't let me take our copy though, so I don't have it.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 10:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks so much! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 7:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Asa wrote:
03.06.2013
Yes, Willow, walk right up to the evil enemy and expect him to sit down and discuss things logically.


I totally want to see them having a civilized discourse over tea and breakfast now.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 7:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

10/06/2013

I had some trouble reading this page. The text was very small, but enlarging the image fixed it. Maybe my eyesight is just that bad!

I loved the anniversary image! Bel as Batman and Jormand in waterwings made me giggle lots ^_^ Congratulations on nine years of beautiful storytelling Lady!
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't think it's your eyesight - I was waffling on the text size for Bel's speech in this chapter. The page file size has changed since he last appeared in the comic and I'm not sure the default size for the font is cutting it anymore.

Anyone else having trouble reading it? (Aside from the trouble of the font itself being purposefully cracked up) If so, I'll go back and make it a bit bigger.

And thank you very much! It does and yet doesn't feel like nine years I've been doing this comic.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 2:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I didn't have a problem with size, but maybe I'm just used to small font from reading on my iPod Touch.

Loved all your work this week, Lady! Though there was a bit of a continuity jump between when Bel is threatening Willow and then is suddenly behind her - I had to create a lot of the motion in my head which I don't normally have to do.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 3:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Willow raised an eyebrow at the towering figure.

"Well then, we appear to be at somewhat of an impasse, Bel: If you take me, then everything I love gets destroyed too. And in bargaining the greatest leverage tends to go to the party with the least to lose in something not happening. If my losses are going to be the same either way, then I may as well kill you in the process and end a threat to everything else. You, in the meanwhile, if we don't strike up an agreement for me to go with you now, can hope to plot and plan and, perhaps, find some other way to win in the long-term. Mutually assured destruction isn't a great bargaining position for someone who needs the leverage to compel me to go along with them you know."
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 5:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Willow! Sad

I keep looking at this image and seeing the Earthsong version of Muppet Babies.

Also, Bel is Batman. (Bel Wayne?)

I'm not having trouble reading the text; it's nice and bold.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 6:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nem wrote:

"Well then, we appear to be at somewhat of an impasse, Bel: If you take me, then everything I love gets destroyed too. And in bargaining the greatest leverage tends to go to the party with the least to lose in something not happening. If my losses are going to be the same either way, then I may as well kill you in the process and end a threat to everything else.


Bel actually mentioned back in the day that he would get the heck out of there once he gets the throne and Willow helps him. http://earthsongsaga.com/vol3/41.html

Whether you believe him or not is another story though Wink

Mane wrote:
I keep looking at this image and seeing the Earthsong version of Muppet Babies.


So did I! I was singing what little I could remember of the theme song while drawing it ^_^

As for the positioning/transitioning in panels, it's hard to decide sometimes just how much "inbetween" motions you need to show. Sometimes it feels a bit tedious to draw every little motion, so I leave some of it implied. I'd agree that this one was maybe a bit of a jump... but I'm not going to go back and add a panel either! Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 6:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, please don't! You had to fit a lot of action in, and a new panel would be superfluous.

Nem - funny.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 5:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe it is me then. I put on my glasses just now and the world leaped into HD!
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

YatesOfYore wrote:
Bel actually mentioned back in the day that he would get the heck out of there once he gets the throne and Willow helps him. http://earthsongsaga.com/vol3/41.html

Whether you believe him or not is another story though Wink


I don't think Bel knows how to play nicely with others Razz
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 11:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

17/06/2013

BAHAHA! Sea horse/unicorn...thing...hippocampus-corn....stuff.

...I swear I'm not crazy.

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I'm loving Sko's new outfit - especially the goggles! And I hope Willow can get around Bel's infection - though if she doesn't, she and Tristram will spend more time together.

So I guess I'm fine either way? Laughing
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ooh, Skogul looks like she'll enjoy this. See Willow? This is what happens when you think you can replace strategy and tactics with willfulness.


And I love the sea-unicorn! I would totally buy this print, too.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 24, 2013 6:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

24.06.13

No kidding, Willow?

Question, what happens to Fel's clothes when she shifts? Wasn't that why she was wearing a basic wrap in the first place? Also, why is she not shifted and blowing fire at the Mandies?
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