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Maeniel

Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 1052 Location: Next to Waldo
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:25 am Post subject: Writer's Group 11: Chekhov's Gun |
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Taking five this time.
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For those that don't know what the writer's group is, it's a group that (used to) meet every month. People sign up, then I'll give them a topic; once the topic is released, you'll have roughly one month to complete a short piece on that subject or in that style that is given. At the end, we vote on who we feel wrote the best while pertaining to the topic.
Ready? Set? GO! _________________ Keeper of Zaebos' and Jormand's powers.

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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3444 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:29 am Post subject: |
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Yis plz!
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Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
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Tinu.

Joined: 23 Mar 2008 Posts: 3661 Location: The land of dreams
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Yay! ^__^
1. Asa
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"If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will spend its whole life believing it is stupid."
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Tenshi

Joined: 18 Apr 2008 Posts: 2594 Location: Star Stuff
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:54 pm Post subject: |
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I'll sign up only if you're having trouble filling the spaces. Otherwise I'll sit this one out.  _________________ . Dubbed "Usagi" by AsA .
Keeper of the Siderean Swords
"If by chance some day you're not feeling well, and you should remember some silly thing I've said or done, and it brings back a smile to your face or a chuckle to your heart, then my purpose as your clown has been fulfilled."
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spellingmistax

Joined: 28 Jul 2009 Posts: 615 Location: Asa took this ^ I stole it ^_^
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:52 pm Post subject: |
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Good luck to whom so ever tries this; I plan to enjoy the results of your labors. Following Tenshi's lead I am going to sit this one out. (Unless you need another body) _________________ "He gave you a life and you should cherish that treasure." - Benny
while Udina asked the usual inane civilian things that came about while under attack: "What's happening? Who is shooting at us? I'm squishy and not wearing armor and I'm a liability, get me to safety, etc.
dubbed Anthrax by Asa
Spellingmistax = mistax = ax = anthrax
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3444 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:17 pm Post subject: |
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I could always use another body... this one's getting a bit worn around the edges. _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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spellingmistax

Joined: 28 Jul 2009 Posts: 615 Location: Asa took this ^ I stole it ^_^
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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I dunno, seems to me you’d be downgrading to a lesser model. Not sure if it would be worth your while.  _________________ "He gave you a life and you should cherish that treasure." - Benny
while Udina asked the usual inane civilian things that came about while under attack: "What's happening? Who is shooting at us? I'm squishy and not wearing armor and I'm a liability, get me to safety, etc.
dubbed Anthrax by Asa
Spellingmistax = mistax = ax = anthrax |
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Talps

Joined: 26 May 2009 Posts: 134 Location: Merrie olde Englande
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 7:09 am Post subject: |
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I wasn't gonna, but...
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Just one more...  _________________
Dubbed reversquee.
Talps = Splat reversed. Splat = Squee |
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3444 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:07 am Post subject: |
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That's what they all say...
*oldtimer trapped in the WG cycle, like in those Dead Zone commercials*
That's what they all say... _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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Lani

Joined: 09 May 2008 Posts: 37 Location: In the Library
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:08 am Post subject: |
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1. Asa
2. Tinu.
3. Talps
4. Lani
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*whoo. I made it! Excited!
*edit*
One more person, one more person, one more person... *chants* _________________ Wherever you go, there you are.
I now posses a Bachelor of Science in secondary education. I am excited. |
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Tinu.

Joined: 23 Mar 2008 Posts: 3661 Location: The land of dreams
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 1:15 pm Post subject: |
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I think we need one of the reserve bodies. _________________ Keeper of Gaia and all the books on Earthsong
"If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will spend its whole life believing it is stupid."
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Tenshi

Joined: 18 Apr 2008 Posts: 2594 Location: Star Stuff
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Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 12:21 am Post subject: |
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I'll play if Maen wants me to.  _________________ . Dubbed "Usagi" by AsA .
Keeper of the Siderean Swords
"If by chance some day you're not feeling well, and you should remember some silly thing I've said or done, and it brings back a smile to your face or a chuckle to your heart, then my purpose as your clown has been fulfilled."
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Maeniel

Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 1052 Location: Next to Waldo
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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I would indeed.
1. Asa
2. Tinu.
3. Talps
4. Lani
5. Tenshi
The topic this time is Chekhov's gun. What this means is that you need to introduce a seemingly irrelevant object early in the narrative whose importance is revealed only toward the end. The name is taken from Anton Chekhov himself, who said that if you place a pistol on the stage in the first act, it should be fired in the second act--otherwise, why put it there in the first place? It's an important element in what most consider "the perfect novel."
Any questions? We'll give until March 9. Good luck! _________________ Keeper of Zaebos' and Jormand's powers.
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3444 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:23 pm Post subject: |
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Oh, interesting!
*rubs hands* _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
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If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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Tenshi

Joined: 18 Apr 2008 Posts: 2594 Location: Star Stuff
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:27 pm Post subject: |
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Mm. The bitter irony of this challenge for me is that I'm not a fan of Chekov's gun in novels, specifically. I enjoy a novel that takes the time to flesh out seemingly unimportant details, which the characters can either take or leave completely at will to solve their uses. For instance, a fully realized civilization will have all sorts of things the characters will bump into, but never use.
On the other hand, utilizing Chekov's Gun efficiently is a talent that almost every screenwriter has in their arsenal. So, let the games begin!
And, ah, you did mean April 9th, right? _________________ . Dubbed "Usagi" by AsA .
Keeper of the Siderean Swords
"If by chance some day you're not feeling well, and you should remember some silly thing I've said or done, and it brings back a smile to your face or a chuckle to your heart, then my purpose as your clown has been fulfilled."
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