[Asa]

This is what I've been writing instead of the WG. It was murder to write, and it's not very good, and it's 15 pages double spaced, and it's up on fictionpress. *dies* It still needs a few edits, but I should finish it by today. Since it's due today.

Please read it and let me know what you think of it. Tamtam, you'll recognize it from last year, and possible some others of you, though I don't know.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2605650/1/In_the_Beginning



{{Song that's stuck in my head at the moment: Shirat Hasticker. >_<}}
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Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven

Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
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[Tamir]

But, but....it's so short! =O The beginning isn't there, and nothing after they reach the palace, and, and, and....

Well.

Better than nothing, I guess. XD But I kinda wanted to read this in its entirety, you know? You better write the whole thing out someday.

And by the way, that's not a great translation for the sticker song. >_> "Hakol biglalcha" means "all because of you," not "all for you", for instance. That's a huge difference!

[Asa]

Did I write it? No. I just linked it. Feel free to change the link to something better, Mr. Mod-Powers!

Yeah, I know, but the limit was between 10 and 20 pages, I couldn't find the whole 'palace destroyed' sequence, and my professor is not one to appreciate the finer points of fantasy, so I tried to tone it down. Also, the full length version isn't complete in my head anyway.

Like I said, chapter one!
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Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^

Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven

Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends.