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daydreamer_girl

Joined: 15 Apr 2008 Posts: 276 Location: Kaneedaaaa!!!
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 12:48 pm Post subject: |
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Eeeee! How pretty, both of them are! That is a nice design for a dress. _________________ Yo.
dubbed "Emma" by Asa
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:30 am Post subject: |
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Save The Date: redux
Wasn't happy with the other version, so I wound up starting over again...
Much simpler, which I think works out better in the end ^_^
Still gotta finish the background, though... _________________ I do commissions!
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3461 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 3:02 am Post subject: |
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I dunno, to me it seems like the flower is too big and the symmetry will be off between the flower and the words, you know? _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 8:15 am Post subject: |
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Really? The flower's the same size as it was before, all that changed was the shape of the shoreline... hmm.
I'll have to throw some sample text onto it, see how everything lines up. I think the size still works fine, but you could be right about the alignment.
Thanks for pointing it out!  _________________ I do commissions!
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3461 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:57 am Post subject: |
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I felt that way on the old one too, I just didn't say it. If you can make the flower smaller digitally, I'd suggest playing with it and trying to fit it more into the corner. If it's all on paper, don't bother, it's not worth the effort. _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:10 pm Post subject: |
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Finished!! -dances-
I did make the flower a little smaller, and scooted it into the corner accordingly, plus all the obvious color and shading ^_^ _________________ I do commissions!
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3461 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 9:23 pm Post subject: |
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Yeees! Somehow, that's better in my eyes - it'll leave more space for the words, and not make the background too busy, you know? Can't wait to see!!! _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 9:34 pm Post subject: |
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LOL m'sorry dear but I won't be posting the version with all the writing on it, since that's a lot of personal information to be displaying on a web forum...
Next up, however, is the invite itself, so you'll have that to look forward to next, at least  _________________ I do commissions!
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3461 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 9:35 pm Post subject: |
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This is true, and it's quite all right.
Or, you could type in gibberish so we could see a mock-up...? _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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thespaceinvader

Joined: 23 Mar 2008 Posts: 650 Location: Cardiff, UK
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 11:11 am Post subject: |
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I suggest inviting Loren Ipsum, and her mother, Dolores Sit-Amet if you're concerned about releasing information in public =D _________________ Keeper of Tristram's rings, and Felucca's very expressive ears. |
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 12:16 pm Post subject: |
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As one who's done catalog layout before, Lorem Ipsum is a dear, familiar friend of mine ^_^
And I suppose I could do an Ipsum mock-up, if that's really something people are interested in seeing? _________________ I do commissions!
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3461 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 1:30 pm Post subject: |
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Yes! If it's not too much work. _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 3:25 pm Post subject: |
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No, it's no work at all ^_^ Just gotta find a nice font to throw on there and we should be good to go  _________________ I do commissions!
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sunshine
Joined: 05 Sep 2008 Posts: 592 Location: Up in the Clouds
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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Alright dearie, just for you!
The font is half-arsed, I'm not sold on the color and the line spacing is obviously going to change when the actual wording is in there _________________ I do commissions!
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Asa

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 3461 Location: Grammar Police HQ. Watch your language, I'm armed with the NYTimes Style Book AND Strunk and White!
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 6:17 pm Post subject: |
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Lovely! May I make a suggestion? Try matching the font color to the main shade of pink in the petal behind the pistil (or whatever it's called). I have a feeling that might stand out more and pull it together better. I realize this is just a mockup and you probably haven't even started yet, but still.
I'm so happy for you!!!!! _________________ Self-styled Forum Grandmother, because I hand out nicknames and hugs whether you want them or not. ^_^
Keeper of the Library and the Gateway to Haven
Nem: "It's the sort of face you just know is getting ready to poke you with something sharp."
BS: "...then insist you eat a brownie."
__________________
If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended...
Give me your hands if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends. |
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