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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

TheBritishInvasion wrote:
if it's not a soulstone power why does she have the nose of a bloodhound?
Eh, our mother can do the same thing and she hasn't got a soulstone...
In an immense twist of irony, that sensitive nose is coupled with asthmatic lungs, so she can't take a deep sniff of anything without going into a coughing fit... but we're getting off topic, now.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love nans eyes :3
Willows eye in the bottom part actually took me back for a sec.
btw the page doesn't look rusty at all Razz
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 9:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

14/4/2008

I have to reiterate what Caelie just said - the page does not seem rusty in the SLIGHTEST. I am loving Nan's eyes of sparkling anger and Felucca's sad face in particular.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is Willow lying on straw? Sad Where's the sexy red sheets! C'mon redux Tristram, get with the program!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know what you're talking about, Lady...the page looks great. The only strange thing is the length of Willow's neck...maybe Tristram stretched it for her! ^^;;

*stares at the prettyness of Willow* *wonders if Tristram is doing the same*
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 4:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Straw? c'mon Tristam!

Fel looks depressed, and I can't begin to guess what you meant by 'rusty.' It looks fine to me!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that the long shot of Willow lying down looks amazing, not at all rusty! Like Tam said, the only thing a little bit off for me is Willow's neck at the very bottom.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 11:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Overall I have to say the page looks fabulous. Though I have to agree about Willow's neck. When I first saw it I was a bit taken aback, it just seems a bit stretched. Other than that, Lady your artwork continues to blow me away with each new page.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah... that's pretty much what I meant by rusty. Rusty = noticing proportion errors AFTER you're done the whole page. >.<;;
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Maybe a little on the proportions as you said Lady, but I think you got better at colouring! I love the lighting on Willow.
Don't worry though, updating 2x a week will undo that rustiness in no time. (But maybe you should update 3 or 4 times just to be sure?)
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love the coloring as well and for some reason i didn't notice the whole neck thing (maybe why i never posted in this part of the forum much in the old forum? xD )
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 6:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm looking forward to the following scene. If Tristram's outer appearance got so much more awesome, his improved character will assimilate me and add me to the horde of fangirls.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hm... I wonder what Neuria's going to look like.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The anticipation of the next page... a rather tingly feeling. I am eagerly awaiting the awesomeness that is Tristram.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 1:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What will Neuria look like indeed! Mwaha Twisted Evil

This next page is killing me with the backgrounds, but it's turning out alright so yeah. ^_^;
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